Positives: actors committed a 100% (Cassie&Alexis)
8.5 for editing (Cassie&Alexis)
The name is fine, (Cassie&Alexis)
I especially liked the establishing shot, because it sets up the entire short film (Jaay)
Suggestions: The end credits need to disapear fulling before the BLOOPERS comes out. (Cassie&Alexis)
The resolution is pretty clear BUT you could show Amanda walking up to Alejandro from behind to come talk to him to add to it and also fix the odd transititon. (Cassie&Alexis)
You could maybe add some music to show the tension between Alejandro and the bullies. (Jaay)
I would recommend changing the background of the title scene to be a little bit more fitting to the film. (Jaay)
The comment made by Cassie and Alexis help us feel confident in how we portrayed our caracters. Also on the theme we feel like we did a good job. A lot of suggestions that we got was on addiding music in the part were the bullies come in which we do if there is time which there should be.
The two best seggestions we got wher addding music and showing Amanda walking up to Alejandro.
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